Wednesday, November 28, 2007

My Pockets

  • My Cell Phone
    • I have my cell phone with me because I consider it my connection to the outside world.
  • Chap stick
    • I have my chap stick with me because I have band, which tends to make my lips chapped.
  • Gum
    • I carry my gum with me because after lunch, when your talking to someone, they don't want to smell your nasty breath.
  • Mints
    • Mint have the same effect as gum. I have them with me to freshen my breath.

Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Mr. Dolphus seems like he is always drunk, but he actually isn't. He acts drunk because he hangs out with the colored folk. In the book, Dill needs a drink of something and Mr. Dolphus offers. "Scout, it's nothings but Coca-Cola." Instead of drinking himself silly, he pretends to be drunk so the other people of the town don't judge him for where he lives and the people he hangs out with. Mr. Dolpus is a good person, the townsfolk just don't see it.

Comment: Randi said- Ashley!!!! This is amazing! I agree with you 110% lol! You did very good in this passage! Mr. Dolphus isn’t that bad of a guy

Comment : Kelsie said “Ashley this is very good. I would have to agree with you because Mr. Dolphus really isn’t that bad of a guy.

Comment : Kelsie said “ Ashley I really like the way you wrote this. It’s very good. You could make a few changes in the last part where it says “where he lives” you could say where he lives and who he prefers to be friends with.

Comment: Kelly said, “I like how you ended the paragraph. That was very very very good!!! I loved it. But anyways, I think to make this better, you could add a little bit more to the beginning or put it into different words. Other than that, it is perfect!!! J

Comment: I think that you have a good paragraph, and I agree he is a good guy, but I think he should just be himself, he shouldn’t care about what people think about him.

Thursday, November 8, 2007

Mr. Dolphus seems like he is always drunk, but he actually isn't. In the book, Dill needs a drink of something and Mr. Dolphus offers. "Scout, it's nothings but Coca-Cola." Instead of drinking himself silly, he pretends to be drunk so the other people of the town don't judge him for where he lives. Mr. Dolpus is a good person, the townsfolk just don't see it.

Tuesday, November 6, 2007

My Four Day Weekend

This weekend was a lot of fun for me. On Thursday night, I went to Christina's house and we had a movie party. We watched The Labyrinth, Muppet Treasure Island, and Young Frankenstein. We watched more, I just can't remember. My favorite was Young Frankenstein. Igor was my favorite character 'cause he was funny and pronounced his name eye-gor. On Friday Christina and I hung out and basically did nothing. Saturday was fun too. I went to Lyman for All State Band auditions and I think I have a good chance of getting in. The ride home was interesting because I was sitting by all the seniors and they have wacky conversations. Sunday was just a tipical Sunday of going to church. Monday I was hanging out with Bobbi Morgan all day. It was a lot of fun. For breakfast, we went to Smith's and got donuts and candy bars, then Subway for lunch. This was a good weekend for me.