Mr. Dolphus seems like he is always drunk, but he actually isn't. He acts drunk because he hangs out with the colored folk. In the book, Dill needs a drink of something and Mr. Dolphus offers. "Scout, it's nothings but Coca-Cola." Instead of drinking himself silly, he pretends to be drunk so the other people of the town don't judge him for where he lives and the people he hangs out with. Mr. Dolpus is a good person, the townsfolk just don't see it.

Comment: Randi said- Ashley!!!! This is amazing! I agree with you 110% lol! You did very good in this passage! Mr. Dolphus isn’t that bad of a guy

Comment : Kelsie said “Ashley this is very good. I would have to agree with you because Mr. Dolphus really isn’t that bad of a guy.

Comment : Kelsie said “ Ashley I really like the way you wrote this. It’s very good. You could make a few changes in the last part where it says “where he lives” you could say where he lives and who he prefers to be friends with.

Comment: Kelly said, “I like how you ended the paragraph. That was very very very good!!! I loved it. But anyways, I think to make this better, you could add a little bit more to the beginning or put it into different words. Other than that, it is perfect!!! J

Comment: I think that you have a good paragraph, and I agree he is a good guy, but I think he should just be himself, he shouldn’t care about what people think about him.